Taco

Glad taco trucks don't come around
I'd stuff my face
Til my belly hit the ground

Oh, I love a soft taco
With tomatoe and cheese
And to eat one curb side right on my knees!

Oh my, I ate one once
And met a funny girl
We both had the Miguel soft taco
Sat on the curb and dreamed of Marocco

To be continued......

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The Rhyme Reacj

Often the rhyme dictates content, it takes time and mind editing to locate the meaning that enhanses the poem and rhymes without being plain - Tacos, very topical, mostly well written, a stretch on a few of the lines to meet the rhyme - Lady A


 

 

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Thanks for stopping by

I just like to write, weather or not it rhymes, I enjoy getting it out! I love capturing my daily activities on paper to read later on for a good laugh or cry. :) peace!