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Time flys
Time flys by
but where does it go
at this tomorrow
ill be 90 years old
no time to blink
life will pass u by
a lifetime is fast
a twinkle of an eye
at 2 years old I pee in the pot
at 70 years old will I make it or not
not long ago i wasn't very old
Woke up today I'm 90 years old
it's time to go
i have stuff to do
cherish your days
your days will cherish you.
Your
style of writing reminds me of my own. I wrote a poem almost the same on this very topic.
I like your style, I like
I like your style, I like your flow
It is said
And well said.
KS
We cant make it
But we try.
That simple " Do it " in the picture
Until the day we die .
I like it
I really like the ending of this poem. You found a good balance in making a declaritive statement about life and not coming off too preachy. I have this problem in my own writing.
Yes In Deed!
Nice one! - allets
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A day cherished
is a solid series
of memories
to unveil later
when it is hard
to cherish anything.
.
Days should be seized,
conquered, stashed
away for later.
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Time flies as does
unfulfilled dreaming.
Get up and go
celebrate you or me
or no one of consequence.
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Rally the feet, hail eyes
to open, now order the body
to carry you fast and safely
into the next thing
happening.
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Stella L. Crews
03-21-16
754a
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