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The ocean night

She's sitting on the coast line once again
The moon is right around the corner to soon light up the sky
Admiring every wave as if they were meant for her...
Wishing they would flow over her head
Shes a beautiful butterfly on the edge of a branch..
If you get to close she'll fly away from you
She's been chased and chased all her life...
Love is like her ghost
She can't see or feel it
But can almost hear it flowing through her veins...
Tonight she saw it in blood leaking into the ocean
Now she is one with her true love

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©7 February 2012 - 3:45am — Fitzgerald
10 February 2012 - 6:36pm — jordan1986
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Your very welcome :)

Your very welcome :)

Kristi a.k.a Jordan

10 February 2012 - 5:59am — jordan1986
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Wow

So deep and amazing. I enjoyed it. Favorite line " Tonight she saw it in blood leaking into the ocean
Now she is one with her true love"

Kristi a.k.a Jordan

10 February 2012 - 6:29am — Fitzgerald
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Thank you so much for taking

Thank you so much for taking the time to read.

7 February 2012 - 5:16am — SSmoothie
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Wah! This is beautiful, I loved the

Imagery and the surprise 'happy' ending! I love the way you bring it together, I love the way you think! , awsome! SS.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

7 February 2012 - 5:27am — Fitzgerald
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Thank you very much!

Thank you very much!