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2005 tearing out my breath
I stand with death
the last breath I breathe
no more oxygen shall I need
one last time I beathe in
I drown in a pool of sin
broken torn apart deep inside
the last tears I've ever cried
the last smile that crosses my face
the last day I spend in this place
the last obsession that crosses my mind
the last of me that you will ever find
the last sign of life inside of me
the last of my eyes you will ever see
on the inside I have been dead for years
but no one ever knew or saw the tears
everyone thought I was alive and well
when really I was torn apart to all hell
so this is my last farewell before I'm dead
this is the last amount of water I can tread
skeletons and skulls will be what you remember me by
locked away in the closet baptized in tears that I cry
this is it, I have gone away, this is a road that is a dead end
everytime you find a tear fall from your eye thats who I am
wow. Thats really good.
I've been browsing around and I see that a lot of people dont use rhyme.
I use rhyme too.
that's awesome.
keep up the awesome writing.
by the way my screenname is noremember222
that last line is SOOO good!
i'm reminded by the people i've lost everytime i cry.. so now i'll think of your poem from now on..