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Unconditional love we take for granted
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2004 tell me does it all seem so ordinary
is your love for him only temporary
is he just another thing stored in memory
tell me does it all seem just the same
and do you ever get the urge to call his name
or are you going through the motions to play the game
well won't you now grab yourself a shopping cart
and let him in so that he can now jump start
your hurting non believing doubtful heart
does it all seem like a story thats a fairy
do you think it's God's love you really carry
does God's love become to seem so ordinary
the last line is a well composed piece of truth by itself. it was poignant in its message and it really hit me in the face.
God's love has indeed become a commodity to us. and to the world it has been devalued to nothing.
i also like the imagery of the shopping cart. which does show effectively and efficiently the easy availability of the recieving and the finding of God's love.
thank you. for this poem. for letting God's love shine through you. may we as Christians learn to love like Him and stop judging those around us, brothers or non brothers (= may we shine like Christ especially in these end times.
In His Love Always,
Cheryl
hey.
thats a really cool poem.
I really like your stuff. I see you do rhyme like me in all poems and not just one. its cool.
I love your words and style.
feel free to instant message me: noremember222
Hopefully someday God's love will seem and be ordinary to all or most of us anyway who choose to let the light shine in and embrace the truth and light and all the good waiting for us to share if we only let it in and don't close ourselves off from it...I know all about being taken for granted and taking things for granted and that does happen way too much at least that I am aware of personally...I think it is a universal truth that needs to be shared or make people think about more...thanks for sharing...Keep writing...Pam