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Snow in May
Snow in May,
Snow in May,
It just had to
Snow in May.
Couldn’t say
It made my day:
I can but rue
The snow in May.
Snow in May,
Snow in May,
It just had to
Snow in May.
Couldn’t say
It made my day:
I can but rue
The snow in May.
I agree with poppy.
I agree with poppy, it reminds me of a poem I wrote in the sixth grade called "The Little Star" I wrote it talking about how all the girls in my school were fake and there was nothing I could do about it. Very simple, a bit longer than yours. But again very simple. I was conversing whether or not to post it, I think I shouldn't. I am afraid that I would only recieve critisism; I'm getting off subject, but I like it. I do need inspiration, I'm running out of ideas for posting. :/
I would like to point out
I would like to point out some of my thoughts in here, but I think I will refrain. I'm really glad that people are criticising this, as it was one of my first batch of "poems". I think it may sound better aloud - I did try to put a lot of ambiguity in here, so I do hope it doesn't come across as that simple! If so, well what can I say, I don't expect EVERYTHING I feverishly dream up to be 'good stuff'. Still, I like the way it sounds.
Inspiration?
Hmm...
Well, what's going on in your life? I bet there's something you'd like to write about.
"Satellite's gone
up to the skies.
Thing like that drive me
out of my mind.
I watched it for a little while:
I love to watch things on TV." - Lou Reed
I am sorry. I never meant to
I am sorry. I never meant to hurt your feelings. But what's going on in my life? Not much! most recent, is I got a new boyfriend! I believe that's what's causing my problem! I am better at writing sorrowful poems, and well ever since he came around, I can barely write anything at all! I tried writing a love poem, they end up sounding corny. xP its a bittersweet moment.
You didn't! I came on here to
You didn't! I came on here to be torn apart (not emotionally, technically) and I'm glad that I am getting pointers with this poem.
Ah yes...
Happiness has a way of not wanting itself written down.
You can write something to him... or for him... if he's the biggest thing on your mind. But yes, do add a dash of realism, because corny is always a risk! Maybe read some of Donne or Shakespeare's love sonnets... those guys could do it and so can you.
"Satellite's gone
up to the skies.
Thing like that drive me
out of my mind.
I watched it for a little while:
I love to watch things on TV." - Lou Reed
All right I will try, and I
All right I will try, and I am totally sure at first I will fail. xD Thank you for the encouragement, and I guess I will have to do my homework too! I will deffintely work on it. But as of right now that is the only thing that is worth talking about in my life...and that is sad. :/
Yeah... God I sound like a
Yeah... God I sound like a teacher... *lone gunshot*
But seriously... it's not sad... just...enjoy it?
Do I really need to say that?
It's the best thing of all. At least I think that. There's lots of other stuff going on in my life, but you know, for my part I always come back to that.
"Satellite's gone
up to the skies.
Thing like that drive me
out of my mind.
I watched it for a little while:
I love to watch things on TV." - Lou Reed
I will while it lasts. Its
I will while it lasts. Its very funny, when I was younger in my teen years, I could only write love poems. I sucked at everything else, I kept wishing I could write deep meaningful poems like a lot of people do. Well then heartbreak striked, and now I suck at writing love poems and can only write sorrowful ones. You get what you wish for, right? Maybe I should wish for both...but with my luck I'll end up with neither!