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Cant Remember (fragments)
Left my soul back in the life before
I was born a fool
without a home
what's the reason, purpose..... I had a plan
I can't remember.
A land of sleep and waking dreams
this land is very close
I am going, take me away
I'm going to Comatose
I lay... in my cot
with rhyme of thought
my mind and body rot
the end I sought and finally bought
I guess we get the things we want.
Rocks of Gold, Black Onyx and Pearls
Little toys for beautiful girls
Rocks and Knives and guns are toys
that have always been for the little boys.
Rocks of gold, black onyx and pearls
The rhymes you think on in your cot are impressive and cross many barriers to assault different perception levels ~ very much enjoyed this write ~~A~~
thanks again
thanks again... no one ever reads these... how'd you happen upon my page?
"Death is a challenge. It tells us not to waste time...It tells us to tell each other right now that we love each other." - Leo F. Buscaglia
"Of course there are no absolute moral rules; moral rues are always provisional, dependa
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When I see a name I have not seen before, I peek in to see if there is a mind behind the comment. Fortunately, I found a mind behind the comment. Sarcasm, like other forms of dry wit, is a skill, (highly under-rated so is straight up reality in metaphor or dreamscape as a place to speake from. Like yr stuff...not a lot of comments, lots of readers - an eye catcher. PP gives high readership, so much to read, write, no time to say so much as I like yr stuff for many. Be well, "How's Denver, high, snowy, and thin aired?"
I had a plan I can’t remember
(for fenrislupus)
I stole your lines again
because I have been lax as
a fox.. So sue me. That will
be good for me. I’ve
never been sued
before.
I wanted to be a
thousandaire. My
dreams were
miniscule when
I was ten.
It started out okay
school books check
job – so much to deviate
from there. Lots of faces.
Life flew by and I hit
50. Then 60.
Later, numbers meant
boxed or straight
310 got me $50.00
on a dream, then lottery
happened and I never took
chances again.
My life was a dare(ing) leap
from logic to hope, good wishes
for me and anyone around at
the time. I live in the now.
From habit or will. I
take it slow, just like that biker
told me. Since then,
always have.
~~~A~~
02-15-13
11:05p
Cool... Hope your not bummed... Cheer up if you are!
you never stole my lines... did you? I just thought the style was similar which I liked... I figured we both just sounded the same in a few... you know the feel... shit.. met a woman tonight... beautiful laid back mellow hippie kind of girl..working at the bar I went to to see a band....I asked if she wanted to go to a museum and she said yes... I asked if she wanted to go to seattle.. and she said yes... I love this part.... can't wait to see he again.... ;)
This is my Divorce... was about my wife... I proposed to her before I ever kissed her... three days after I met her... lol... we lasted 10 years...long story but we still love each other.
Got some cool comments on that one. Thanks! ;)
"Death is a challenge. It tells us not to waste time...It tells us to tell each other right now that we love each other." - Leo F. Buscaglia
"Of course there are no absolute moral rules; moral rues are always provisional, dependa