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Show me your Soul
I've got the time.... and you've got the taste
and we have no time left to waste
Come... let me fill your warm wet place
and paint a smile across your face....
You don't have a body thats perfect
Your face isn't the best to see
but much of what counts is hidden
and that's what's important to me
I don't have a body that's perfect
and my face is nothing great to show
There must be plenty of people.. More Beautiful
than us you know....
But take a chance to find out.... the things you can not see
I want to feel love and kindness
laying next to me....
show me your soul... and your deepest sea
there's a ship sailing... and together it's
WE
I like this. I could probably give you a dozen reasons why I like it, but let's just suffice it to say - it's real. It's human I have always been a believer that it is what is inside that is important. Not a lot of guys do. It's romantic and brutally erotic at the same time.
This is a great piece of poetry. It's realistic, that's a good thing.
This song is incredible, but even so, I hope you didn't share it with its inspiration. This is not exactly what a girl likes to hear. I'm not sure why. But it's comforting to know that some guys care about spirit more than looks since beauty is temporary and so fragile. I used to have beautiful eyes and now, even though I'm sober, I still look like a drunkard. It sucks. But I suppose I should just concern myself with "the things you can not see." And as to your comment at the bottom--that "Show me you Soul" is lame--I don't agree. I don't mean to sound like one of those inspirational self-help books they peddle on Oprah, but as long as your work has personal value, then it is not lame.