Ocean Song

Walk towards the Ocean
Stop at the Sea
Waves washing by
Bring... Messages for me
Of a place that I once knew
Now so lost in the past
And oh how the lives change
and Sand becomes glass....
With you full of sorrow
Me filled with the grief
Time heals the worst wounds (yeah...)
..and brought us relief....
I looked back to the Ocean
Looked out through the Sea
Cast away lost love
So far from me.....
Found some New Beginning
Soon to forget the end...
Lost my first lover
yeah I lost my Best Friend.....
Walk towards the Ocean
Looked out on the sea...
The waves washing by
Seem so silent for me........

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Athalia Lystra's picture

Such a lovely image and yet such a tragic ending.
The ocean...perhaps one of the only 'beautiful' places we've got left on this little green earth of ours.
The images were astounding and your voice so truthful.

Eric Cockrell's picture

look out into the waves... before we were waves we were water, and to water we return! good writing. eric

Natalie Gnall's picture

i think this is a great poem...i was actually just thinking about taking a trip to the ocean to digest my last relationship...it can soothe us while at the same time make us feel worse...anyway, your poem just jumped out at me and i'm really glad. thanks for sharing!

Kristine Snow's picture

I truly enjoyed this one. Lost love is always sad. This was beautiful.

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

Something made me think of you today, and I realized that I haven't read any poems by you in awhile...so I stopped in, this looked interesting, and I read in with enjoyment. This is just beautiful, and sad. I pictured you walking along a coast somewhere thinking about love lost, but there is happiness in these lines, too. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.