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Her Again
Can not place the pain.....
Can not think of her again.....
My thoughts wrapped around the blade she holds.
How long can she be....stuck here in this memory
Wash away her darkness from my soul.
And if a heart bleeds?
And a lonely heart needs, (what for?)
And the blood rushes faster to the floor...
Can not place the pain...(where?)
oh.. I thought of her again...
Oh please take this darkness from my soul.
And if a heart bleeds?
And a lonely heart needs, (what for?)
And the blood rushes faster to the floor.....
How long can she be...stuck here in this memory..
Wash away her darkness from my soul.
Misgivings and regret..
Nothing seems to help me yet (yet!)
I can’t shake the beauty from my mind...
.............................I guess I need time...
.............................I guess I just need time.
Distance does not part,
Still she pushes through my heart,
Rage and Anger won’t make her go away.
How long can she be.....stuck here in this memory...
Wash away her darkness from my soul.
And if a heart bleeds?
And a lonely heart needs, (what for?)
And the blood rushes faster to the floor.....
Liked this read. Nice.
Liked this read. Nice.
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mmm good poem
Painful words of a lost love. It reminds me of a poem I wrote called DISTRAUGHT HEART. I feel the pain in your poem and still live it everyday. Great poem.
The repetition of the line" and the blood rushes to the floor" drives a powerful message straight through the heart. There is such insight here in to the emotions that accompany love lost. Well done. Amy Riberdy
Gentle is the night♥
Love is eternal,but sometimes it causes pain. Thanky ou for a brilliant poem. Love Misty :-)
Well, .. that was fresh and interesting! I find myself often willing memories of past loved out of my mind... doesn't work very often but I always try. Keep writing. :)
I have can really relate to this one... it makes me think of the pains that also have suffered due to someone... well thought out and written... my favorite line.... I guess I just need time.... boy I sometimes wonder if that is all I needed... time did not seem to help at times.... this was awesome... thank you for posting this ... Renee'
This evokes pain...and for that thank you, you have given us something to feel.
i'll be featuring you in the next Dead Poet's Epitaph..... you can read my critque of your piece then....... .....i too feel the excruciating pain of the heart......
Beautifully crafted from the heart. I enjoyed your poem "Her" A very vivid picture.
Hiya I really enjoyed reading your poem. I could feel the pain and sorrow as I read it. You use your words well, in particular I liked the (what for?)...very effective. Well done Have a good day Roz :)