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far away.... if I could wander
far away... I would wonder
where you were and would you ever come
back to me
If I could stay... I would wonder
If I could stay... I would wander
with you
by my side
on the edge of every yesterday
we could fly away..... together
we could find a way.... I know we could find a way
I know... we could.. find..a ..way.

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©19 December 2001 - 11:06pm — fenrislupusgrey
20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Angel Incognito (not verified)
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This is, I think, my favorite piece of your work so far. Your writing technique is very...real; at least I think "real" is the word I'm looking for. Whatever it is, it's powerful. Keep writing. -Angel who, by the way, happened to stumble over an old copy of Poe's "The Conqueror Worm" earlier today.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Rachelle Wiegand (not verified)
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Grey, very beautiful, expressive poem here. I really loved these lines: "with you by my side on the edge of every yesterday" very lovely and well-written poem. Good use of words, and showing that not every (or any) of the lines have to rhyme to sound great! thanks for posting!