a blackened wick is what remains
the flame was blown out just recently
although the candle hasn't burnt down to the stick
it won't be lit again
the day won't be quite as bright
we don't know what she may have been
all we know is what she left behind
an apartment cluttered with children's toys
photos of good times
in the bedroom there's sheets on the windows
there's a four poster bed for a reason
on the floor there's a box full of secrets
it won't be opened
here older boys and girls would play
all inhibitions were left behind
as the door would close, her face began to shine
this was her finest hour, this was her finest time
she's gone
and it's not gonna be all right
not for me she's gone
but not forgotten, she's still here
in all those years she touched so many lives
who's gonna watch that little girl she left behind
carol anne stands alone in the school yard
all the other children have gone
after waiting for hours she can't understand
why her mother left her sad
in the darkness she sees definition
in the silence she hears someone calling
after nightmares she lies in bed screaming
but theres no reaction
theres no one listening
theres no one now shes gone
and its not gonna be all right
not for me shes gone
I like this poem.
Although some of your others leave me utterly confused... this one spoke to me.
Good work.