Fantasy

I see you

All I feel is pain

I see you

All I feel is my heart race

I see you

All I feel is confused

I wish you understood

I wish you felt what I feel

I wish you saw what I see

I wish you knew what I know

I wish you saw my pain

I wish you saw me

All you see is this lie

This made up "me"

This fantasy

I aint real

Nethier is what I wear,

How I act

or what you see

Its all a made up fantasy

No one knows me

No one will

No one will take the time

To see......

the real me!


Author's Notes/Comments: 

~*~KrIsTa~*~HiGgS~*~

View fallenangel0507's Full Portfolio
Chelsea N.'s picture

This was a good poem, the meannig is clear, I liked it..
Good Job. I used to wear a mask for the world, no one ever knew me...trust me..its betetr to be who u r..and let people deal with it, thento be something your not just to make them like you..
~Chels

Tsuki Senritsu's picture

Wow this is a very deep one.
i remember someone close to me wrighting same thing, well the same thought. sometimes people dont see the real you, or it is you that doesnt see you...we humans are sometimes confused with our own thoughts. especially at this age, some call it puberty. i call it the time you see whats right and wrong. just like a little kids mind we try and bend truths. even if we are grown up.....

Dj

Kathryn Helene's picture

::Claps:: I love it.