Tentatively treading on a sliver of pure ice
Honestly just dreading pretending to be nice
A warm and heavy feeling calmly weighing on my heart
wishing that you never had that gnawing need to part
how beautiful this pain feels
scratching at my bones
the world within my head reels
in melancholy tones
I'm breaking in the wind
my arms flayed by my sides
wincing at my sins
all holiness has died
mortified and terrified
afraid to be alone
but humbled now enough to see
there's no shame in being- sold
there'll be a time for victory
when the stars are right
but for now it's plain to see
this is not my fight...
sitting on a rock alone
in the dead of night
not sure which is the way home
and searching for a light
but suddenly my eyes begin the register out here
i am more that i expected
a giant without fear...
so let that little bit of ice go crashing down below
i will hold myself out here
and ward off that bitter cold.
i never knew the angels were there watching over me
until i realised that those angels were part of me
I really liked this one, and I only critiqued it because I saw someone else do it! lol! But seriously, I like the metre. Is it because you write songs that there is a undeniable metre in most of your work? Love you much!
luvv this poem ... and the use of werds .. awesome chick