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Dispassionate

What a word.
So ugly or so beautiful,
depending on where you sit,
what you see,
why you are there,
and where your heart
or your finger lies.

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last updated 19 September 2013 - 4:47am
©29 March 2013 - 2:49pm — Faded_shades
2 May 2013 - 3:58am — running_with_rabbits
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:) perspective :)   I like

:) perspective :)

 

I like this one very much, the sexual undertones are just right

Much Love

Ashley

20 May 2013 - 1:34pm — Faded_shades
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;-)

I thought you might, although the title is flat, but a necesary(?) slap. I've been sifting some dregs & wondering how they would taste if inked (byted?).  The law of unintended consequences rules ;-)

20 May 2013 - 3:50pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) the title is perfect for

:) the title is perfect for the poem, it would ruin it if you changed it. 

Much Love

Ashley

11 April 2013 - 1:34am — SSmoothie
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Dispassionate there is a

Dispassionate 

there is a cold strength behind that word 

Like the forged steel of a katana

that has been through the blazing blue fire.

great write.

 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

20 May 2013 - 1:19pm — Faded_shades
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;-)

One of the coldest & hardest words I know. I was curious what others might make of it. Love & HUGSS always! ;-)