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South of heaven is where I dwell ,
Behind these walls of hell .
Taking one last breath ,
before I lay myself to death .
Is their something I should have known ,
As I cry for help over the phone .
You showed me love, hate and regret ,
I think about over this unforgettable sunset .
Taking one last breath ,
As I lay myself to death .
No use crying over me ,
everything will be better you will see .
I stare into your eyes ,
I say my last goodbyes .
Taking one last breath ,
As I am put to death .

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©27 November 2011 - 3:37am — facethetruth2b
7 March 2012 - 9:20pm — SSmoothie
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Wow this is powerfully good!

HadNt read this yet! Wonder how come? Its beautifuly deep! Wonderful! Hugs SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

7 March 2012 - 9:52pm — facethetruth2b
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thanks a bunch my dear friend

thanks a bunch my dear friend ....

you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

30 November 2011 - 8:57pm — Fitzgerald
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What a poem.. I mean that in

What a poem.. I mean that in a positive way of course

7 March 2012 - 8:26pm — facethetruth2b
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thanks for reading and

thanks for reading and commenting...Much appreciated...

you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......