Ride



from my ears to my elbows

right down to my feet

sitting here feeling

something like defeat

something like depression, exhaustion, and pain

looking out the window seeing nothing but rain

baby let me ride with you tonight

lets speed to a place where no one can see

where no one can judge us, we can be free

cause with you I discover a brighter side of me




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Afzal Shauq's picture

love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq