Amazing grace,
how sweet the sound
that lifted me from
the world all around,
and took me in the night
like a thief,
without a sound.
Amazing grace,
thank you for showing me
the wrong and the right way to be.
Thank you for being there
even in my sin,
because I know
in the end,
you will win.
Amazing grace,
my troubles are through.
Taken away they were,
in the night by you.
You picked me up,
and dusted me off
when I was on the ground,
so I wouldn't die off.
Amazing grace,
in you I will always trust,
because now it is
that I know your love.
i tell you what..... i havn't read too many of the poeams yet but so far i like them all......... you have a way with words and it is great that you can find the words to put it on paper and make it really stand out. keep it uo it is wonderful!!!!!!!
Good visual statements..repitition was not used too much and great choice of words.
this is a good poem, its brave to express how you feel about God. everyone is not always excepting in life, but you have to keep on going and i like that.
Is it just me or doesn't this sound a lot like the song.