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Falling Twilight
The skies falling, with absurd crushing weight
I can't help but stumble in every direction I take
It's the beginning of the end, time for my last goodbyes
I can't live through the pain buried deep inside.
I tried to stay strong, I really tried to hold on
But nothing lasts forever and I've lost grip upon this bond.
I know you've all been worried, and tried your best
But nothing lasts forever and I finally need rest.
Look up upon the falling twilight, and think of me
Remember me for what I was and what I'll always be.
Wish upon these broken stars and remember me
For what I was, and what I knew I'd never be.
As suicide notes go i think this would sell by the bucket load!Seriously though i didn"t find it to depressing as some of these type of poems can be. Like your use of rhyme and over all i enjoyed your demise very much. Job done. Enjoyed.
baby... i'm in tears... you have such an amazing talant. its almost sureal. don't you ever leave me babe, you die and i die with you. we're in this together, forever <3