Hello there, my dear;
I'm everything you fear
I see your hollow gaze
Burning and ablaze.
| I am you. |
Hello dear, are you so bold?
Or are you putting up a show?
You're shivering, dear;
Those pills won't help you here.
| I am you. |
Who am I? I am your shadow
I will always be there to follow
Dry your eyes, my dear;
You're choking on your tears.
| I am you.|
Is it worth your life, dear?
All the pain, the anger and strife?
Drop the bottle, step forward;
And take a look at the mirror.
| I am you. |
Your face is absolutely white
Your lips twisted in delight
Your eyes are shallow; hollow
And your soul is forever cold.
| I am you. |
Who am I? I am you, my dear
You've become all that you've feared
I'm here to save you, within this dream
Drop the bottle; step foward fearlessly.
|Who are you?|
|I am you.|
What a very somber poem of reflect. I enjoyed this one greatly. It reminded me of a steady beat to a song. I can hear the tempo, the drums, and the echoing voice of a soul mourning. Incredible, dear. Keep this up -- I have to say, I like this one even more than the last I just read. You're inserting more and more ideals within your writing. Amazing.