I tried to stand up again.
But in my mind I'm lost again.
Rain sends down acidic questions.
Trapped in a box without dimensitons.
I don't want to write my lifes last chapter.
Now all I hear is voice and laughter.
Lookin' for the red letter exit.
All I had to pay was my ticket.
My ticket, MY life, i gave my life.
To end all of my strife.
Now as time winds down.
As my body hits the ground.
wow. i really like this poem. it has alot of meaning in it. keep up the good work!