The hate inside me grows,
Vengeance fills my heart,
Black are the days that follow,
Denying me my right of life and art,
Hating eternally all of this world,
Wishing destruction and fire to all,
Resting in wait, now I am curled,
Hoping for the world to fall,
Darkness engulf this well,
Full of poison and hate,
Sending this sanctuary down to hell,
Sealing all of their fate!
Eternally Forgotten,
Pain of which I am drowning in,
For the crime of the damnation,
Just want to be free of all this tin,
Wandering machines of a corrupted world,
Hell inside, My soul in flame,
Passion and love tortured by my sins,
Knowing nothing but torment and mind games,
Feeling your presents in my darkest hour,
The light fades black for me.
This is very nice. The structure runs very smooth. I really like how you present and describe the emotion, and this poem makes me feel good, knowing that I've felt that way, this poem creates emotion outside itself. Nice writing.
I like it....very powerful and intense