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Half a Dozen Roses
I see a white rose
that represents the souls
of those who feel happy
of those who feel whole
I see a purple rose
that represents the love
of those whose hearts have wings
to fly like a dove
I see a pink rose
that represents innocence kept
of those who stayed pure
until they could wed
I see a yellow rose
that represents broken dreams
I feel their pain
I hear their screams
I see a red rose
that represents blood spilled
because the world couldnt be
just as one willed
I see a black rose
that represents the dead
whose precious life
was so forcibly shed
I see the roses
spread o'er the world
When I stop to think about it...
wait i gotta hurl
i'm not here to sit and critisize your work becasue i'm not in the place to do so but what i will do is give you my opinion so here goes:
your work is good and has talent and potential written all over it. i think you should step outside the format and write soemthing that doesn't rhyme, contrary to popular belife POETRY DOES NOT HAVE TO RHYME. i just had to make that clear. so try something for me and write soemthing in your own sort of format. but hey who am i to talk i only have a few poems posted myself and they suck ass. but i never said that you had to do this it's just a suggestion.so think about it.