I've Changed

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Me

This year I have changed

Evolved into someone else

I've grown up and matured

Into a different person

A person who isn't afraid

And can handle almost anything

Someone who doesn't sweat the small stuff

Doesn't look deep into problems

Accepts things for how they are

Since change is impossible

I've been complimented many times

For being the strongest person

Some one may know

I used to worry about what people thought

But now, I could care less

I think that this change is possibly good

It's amazing what good

Can come from something so bad

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Since about the beginning of August...i went though a life changing experience and now i am a different person...and it's a good change i think

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Becky Rasmussen's picture

I like how everything rhymed, and yet, it still totally flowed. Not many people can do that.

The line "some one may know" should be typed "Someone may know" but thhat is the only typo I caught. Maybe you did it on purpose, but if it was on purpose than it should be more obvious as to why you did it.

It must have been some change to make such a thought provoking poem.

Since change is impossible
this line is a bit misleading since you are talking about how you have changed. It doesnt quite seem to fit there.

-Becky