This year I have changed
Evolved into someone else
I've grown up and matured
Into a different person
A person who isn't afraid
And can handle almost anything
Someone who doesn't sweat the small stuff
Doesn't look deep into problems
Accepts things for how they are
Since change is impossible
I've been complimented many times
For being the strongest person
Some one may know
I used to worry about what people thought
But now, I could care less
I think that this change is possibly good
It's amazing what good
Can come from something so bad
I like how everything rhymed, and yet, it still totally flowed. Not many people can do that.
The line "some one may know" should be typed "Someone may know" but thhat is the only typo I caught. Maybe you did it on purpose, but if it was on purpose than it should be more obvious as to why you did it.
It must have been some change to make such a thought provoking poem.
Since change is impossible
this line is a bit misleading since you are talking about how you have changed. It doesnt quite seem to fit there.
-Becky