Soft on the mountainside
Crawl up
Touch toes to ice cling tight the smell
Of air around stings with hot chocolate snowflake
In circles
Of the pathway carved behind
Below ropes
Into the sky we fall from atop with a flag
Waving at breezes
From the sun in purple skies it gets colder
And crunches underfoot
The second line where snow sticks
To nose
Eyelashed unleash avalanche
Toothpicks scatter likely the trees
See it coming into darkness wedged
Between the ice is animal with
Steaming sweat
Guts on fire lungs bursting
With each step
Sweet victory falls behind
Into crevices the suns rays find our centers and warm
Lunches far into the white night
When we huddle into the wind
Howling love into the darkness
The wolves
Are the moon
And I can't feel my feet
the depth of your writing is intense.... I love that work I have read so far.... hope to read all that you have posted here so far.... but starting with those that have no critique.... you are truly of the poets realm....