Time

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Love/Relationships

Six hours pass like six days,

waiting for this one moment.

One moment that feels like one second, when

tonight you'll say 'I love you'

And time stands still, until

Tommorrow, when you say goodbye

In one second that feels like

Eternity.

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jecantz's picture

DAMN!!!, all i can say is, this poem is tite, its easy to get lost in your words. I belive that u can tell alot about a person by their words, "Gifted" is all i can say about you. keep it true.

Netta Jack's picture

I see you are a prose expert. All right!!!! You have a way with words. You paint pictures and convey emotion and it reads as though it is all effortless to you. Keep your pen in motion.