ANGUISH

Tell the stars to vanish like a liar

Tell them not to increase my aches

If I could I would burn lonely nights

And throw the moon's face in a pit of fire.

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POSTED ON MARCH 17, 2010.

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Your less is more in this is outstanding. Have you been conversing with Afzal Shauq perhaps? (grins like a heathen) He has this perfected. That is why I ask. Okay, Okay, don't throw anything at me. I'm just teasing you but this less is more piece is really an eye catching little beauty. I nod before the mastery of your pen Sir Poet, so smile I just complimented you!
again you know who!........so why type it?