THE CUCKOO AND THE PILGRIM - 4 (Renga on revelations with Deborah Russell)

Deborah Russell, Cuckoo (C) begins stanzas. Muhammad Naveed Ahmed, Pilgrim (P) responds:



-- C

autumn announces

in the nimbus of red sun

what color are leaves?



-- P

rainbow sweeps doubts

we are the best

why look at colours?



-- C

i am what i am

my eyes crystallize colors

the canvas is white



-- P

white hides mysteries

heart a prism

soul is on the throne



-- C

raw umber of flesh

cadmium a midas coat

a joseph coat waits



-- P

blind steep cave

deceived by promises

dream becomes reality



-- C

rivers flow like shroud

mystery of white suffused

that is the promise



-- P

life water sparkles

all barriers broken

isn't faith a mystic?



-- C

all men prophecy

interpret dreams and translate

yet only faith knows



-- P

silence is wisdom

the sufi understands

what is left to explain?



-- C

silence a variant

solace the definition

do trees have wisdom?



-- P

heart beats are heard

by a chosen few

ask the olive branch



-- C

many eyes seek peace

olive branches and ointment

where is the mercy?



-- P

mercy is peace

deep are still waters

the heart is resplendent



-- C

the vineyard remains

generations produce fruit

is wine a liquid?



-- P

matter becomes extinct

Zamzam refreshes

ah, how will be Kauthar?



-- C

thirty five metres

seeped in pilgrims tradition

why im not chosen?



-- P

Hallaj said Annal Haqq

they chopped him, he laughed

where is his greater cross?



-- C

ambiguity

weighs heavy within the heart

this necklace a cross

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Renga session with Deborah Russell on January 20, 2002.

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