THE CUCKOO AND THE PILGRIM -3 (Renga on faith with Deborah Russell))

Muhammad Naveed Ahmed begins Renga as Pilgrim (P), Responses by Deborah Russell, Cuckoo (C).





-- P

cobwebs entangle

lizards, bats stare

angel on horizon?

-- C

the sun rises in east

horizontal perspective

where is the answer?

-- P

western shadows melt

eyes and heart rejoice

wondrous signs appear

-- C

in silence of trees

the language of great mountains

are there no shadows?

-- P

sun swallows darkness

valleys know the secret

dawn of revelation

-- C

in absence of light

prevalent absolution

a photon of faith

-- P

blackened mirror lies

light is eternal

ask the fallen dark wings

-- C

diamond refractions

cobolt crystal persuasions

man becomes airborne?

-- P

autumn's spell over

ray of hope dazzles

pegasus left behind

-- C

absolute zero

the carnage of religions

yet faith reconstructs

-- P

staff obeys faith

magicians bewildered

a nation finds freedom

-- C

mountains rise from earth

crumble into deep oceans

are stars infinite?

-- P

comets are pegs

my world is above

beyond dimensions

-- C

between here and there

numerous tangents and lines

what measure is faith?

-- P

infinite orbits wait

hang on with trust

limitless vistas smile

-- C

congruence defines

subjugates infinity

is trust a resolve?

-- P

creation in abeyance

we are venerated

what do I see?

-- C

myopic visions

the creator of all light

blindness erases

-- P

all galaxies bow

faith wins battle

Lucifer's legion falls

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Renga session with Deborah Russell on Jan 19, 2002.

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