The wind keeps humming,
Like an oft-repeated tune,
On a fed-up traveller's lips.
It is gray all around;
In this drudgery of routine.
Waves crash angrily against the ledge:
You keep on asking me why,
Nothing is like it used to be.
How can a misfit answer,
When temples have submerged,
Trying to solve this cyclic enigma?
Standing on the brink of two worlds,
We find ourselves nowhere.
all I can say is wow. I really liked it because it flowed well and isn't so up-front to where it's simple poetry. Good good good