Angels in the Rain
I hear angels in the rain
just a call I can't explain,
memories always worth the time when I'm alone.
Dare I forget so easily
what Cupid's arrows did for me
though I loved them then they still linger now.
Walkin in the heat and wet
I can't forget with no regrets
Angels in the rain
Between the drops I hear my name
I see them clearly now.
What's done is done but still I feel
the broken arrows that never heal
and there's no easy cure for them but time.
So now I must keep on my way
after all I never stay
and though I've made some mistakes I weep divine.
Walkin in the heat and wet
I can't forget with no regrets
Angels in the rain
Between the drops I hear my name
I see them clearly now
Oh yeah walkin in the heat and wet
with angels in the rain
I hear them callin my name
Angels in the rain
lovely piece
i loved it
sad but has good rhythm... would make a really pretty song accompanied by acoustis guitar, and/or maybe piano. nice writing. eric
Just the right mix of melancoly, regret and wanderlust, Eric. I can sense your musical side here, the nice rhythm, clever reps, time to savor an image... Well done, I say. Ken
My Secret River
Loved "Angels In The Rain." You write with a dreamy quality that I enjoy!
I posted "Angels In The Rain" @ my angels club:
I really enjoyed this one. Very nice to read. Like the style.keep it up =) zool
Please stop by and post your angel poems to my angel club: