im sorry

I'm bitter against the world,
but if you only knew.
Knew the truth of my past.
All the heartbreak I've been through.

If you only knew the world in my eyes
You would understand why I'm not the girl You used to know.
Back when the world was a wonder.
All stories led to happily ever after.
All before the world went cold.

Darkness fills my heart.
My heart is vulnerable to attacks,
So I'll keep on guarding it.
I wish you could understand

And I'm sorry
I'm not that girl anymore

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raminastar's picture

I really like this piece my

I really like this piece my favorite part would have to be.

"If you only knew the world in my eyes
You would understand why I'm not the girl You used to know.
Back when the world was a wonder.
All stories led to happily ever after.
All before the world went cold."

I am not the one that likes to say poetry is to be this way or that way so I am not sure what you seek in my taking a look. I really like it and the hidden flow that captivates you as you read on. It is strangely formatted but I believe that in itself is creative :)

elmoflim's picture

There's no right way to

There's no right way to format poetry :). It is what it is and one poem shouldn't have just one take of viewing or interpretating. So I'm happy you enjoyed reading this however you read it :)