lie

Lie to me
Take my hand
Tell me we're invincible

Spin me around
And we can dance in silence
Time ticking till the end of us

Lie to me
Tell me our love will never die
Our memories won't fade away.

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Wow.. this is deep and it

Wow.. this is deep and it reminds me of a song by Reba called "You Lie" Its very different as her's is about someone lieng and in your's you are asking to be lied to.. I know this feeling its an ugly and desperate feeling. You express it so intensly here. Another of your poems I like. Keep them coming :)