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First Time (erotic entry)
She lies down on the bed,
he gets on top of her
they begin to kiss eachother passionatley
she slides her hand up his shirt
and begins kissing his neck
he takes off her bra and begins to
gentley massages her breast with his toungue
she moans in the deepest pleasure,
scratching her nails down his back,
he begins to slide off her pants
and kisses her thieghs gentley
she gets down on her knees
and pulls out his rock hard cock
she begins to run her hands up and down
he moans and falls deep into pure ectasy
she delivers a deep tornado around his cock
he moans louder
she pulls off her panties and climbs on top
of his huge rock hard mountain
her wings spread open she begins to sore into pure ectasy
and turns into a butterfly
together they travel the world of love
she is breathing heavy
he is ready to shoot like a volcano errupting
finally she reaches her highest point
they have finished and lay next to eachother
She kisses him on the lips and he kisses her
they fall asleep forever in Love
only one tiny complaint here.......stop groaning it's not so bad
penis should be cock......... penis is too medical sounding. doctors ask about your penis women who love a man touch his cock. Just a suggestion, if you don't believe me take a survey from your female friends. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.
i didn't want it to be too
i didn't want it to be too trashy/ but I added it and it looks better
good job!
I know now you are going to joke back yeah that's what she said......... ha ha. poem looks much better now. Not trashy at all.......... M.