she sits on the porch drinking soda and smoking a ciggaret
she looks over with a sad look on her face
as cars pass her by
I notice she holds in her screaming out cries
all she does is looks over at me and smiles
I smile back and start to look at her again
were is your friends why is she sad
should I go over and introduce myself
what will she say
so I walk up to her and say Hi
she begains to cry as she talks about her night
dumped by her boyfriend for another girl
friends left her hanging at a coffee house
and she had to walk home
I asked her why she is on the porch and not inside
she says this isn't my house I just stopped to rest
so I leave her and walk down the street
I keep thinking about her constantly
soon I arive at my house and I fall asleep
wondering if she is thinking of me
The next morning I wake and I read in the paper
Local girl found dead
the body of a young girl was found bellow the bridge
police say it was suicide
authorites say they found a note that said
I don't mean to cause anymore damage
i don't want to make someone sad
so i'll jump off this bridge and end it
and bellow the letter she writes
thank you to that boy
who gave me one last happy thought
I sit shocked I start crying in tears
i can't believe she is gone
i can't believe her last thoughts were of me
the next day there is a local report
a man was found dead inside his home
police said he died of gunshot to the head
authories believe it was suicide
a note was left beside
it read
to the whole world
i killed myself to be with this one girl who i made happy
i don't want her to be sad where she is going
but I want to be by herside
I want to hold her so she doesn't cry
and to all the people i know
I did it for love
signed me
its a rich idea of poem and sweetly done too.. means you are good poet .. best of luck, I like to read new and good poems..your's one of them..hope you read my poems if they touch your heart...as your did mine
awwwwwwww ~sniffs~ damn eyes are leaking.. This is really sad, and I love it...
wow this is good
WoW , This Is Beautiful, I Loved It !this was sad but sweet, Keep Up The Amazing Work Elliot, You're Really Talented, Take Care Of Yourself And Keep Writing :)bye
sup man you got skills