13 December 2006 - 1:20am — Essence Scott (not verified)
This is the best poem in the history of poetry. First, it makes a highly true statement, and every male in the entire world needed to hear that said out loud, in large capital letters. My only criticism is that, perhaps you should have considered repeating yourself once, or twice, or possible about ten or fifteen times. This poem was so good, that I started to use periods and capital letters in my critique. Another excellent aspect of this poem is the fact that it was so short. As Socrates said, brevity is the soul of wit, meaning that short poems are infinately better than long ones. Another advantage of a short poem is the fact that, if it is bad, it's short, and if it is good, you can read it more times in a shorter period of time. dude....i showed my friend this and HE wanted me to submit it so...forgive me, even though it is good
This is the best poem in the history of poetry. First, it makes a highly true statement, and every male in the entire world needed to hear that said out loud, in large capital letters. My only criticism is that, perhaps you should have considered repeating yourself once, or twice, or possible about ten or fifteen times. This poem was so good, that I started to use periods and capital letters in my critique. Another excellent aspect of this poem is the fact that it was so short. As Socrates said, brevity is the soul of wit, meaning that short poems are infinately better than long ones. Another advantage of a short poem is the fact that, if it is bad, it's short, and if it is good, you can read it more times in a shorter period of time. dude....i showed my friend this and HE wanted me to submit it so...forgive me, even though it is good
LMFAO smartarse lol