broken dreams inside my head
puzzled stories left unread
so much confusing
why am i losing my palce
Broken tears on the side of my face
All the answer left in space
so much ignoring
oh why is it puring in my head
Turned down the lights tonihgt
hoping things will be all right
after all i done for them
this is the way to tahnk a friend
as thew world goes day by day
will you remeber my bruised face
and as my relationships ends will you see the scars left behind me
just like me for me
even though it's hard to love me
after all the scars he left on me
i know it's wasn't my fault but i knew you were the one to call
..oh oh oh oh i think i did it
oh oh oh i hope you read it
its very emotional, as it should be....
Hey im feeling wat your saying in this poem. The usage of your words flow.. and i especially like the first verse. "broken deams inside my head, puzzled stories left unread, so much confusing, why am i losing my place" sorry for writing it.. i got excited.. its totally speaking to wat im feeling. nyce poem
Wow, I really like this one, I find myself relating to it quite a bit. Thanks for this! You have talent. Peace and love.