Scars

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Teenage Chronicals

broken dreams inside my head

puzzled stories left unread

so much confusing

why am i losing my palce



Broken tears on the side of my face

All the answer left in space

so much ignoring

oh why is it puring in my head



Turned down the lights tonihgt

hoping things will be all right

after all i done for them

this is the way to tahnk a friend



as thew world goes day by day

will you remeber my bruised face

and as my relationships ends will you see the scars left behind me



just like me for me

even though it's hard to love me

after all the scars he left on me

i know it's wasn't my fault but i knew you were the one to call

..oh oh oh oh i think i did it

oh oh oh i hope you read it

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THANKING A FRIEND IS ALL YOU NEED TO SURVIVE

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Essence Scott's picture

its very emotional, as it should be....

Maria Barrett's picture

Hey im feeling wat your saying in this poem. The usage of your words flow.. and i especially like the first verse. "broken deams inside my head, puzzled stories left unread, so much confusing, why am i losing my place" sorry for writing it.. i got excited.. its totally speaking to wat im feeling. nyce poem

starlite_angel's picture

Wow, I really like this one, I find myself relating to it quite a bit. Thanks for this! You have talent. Peace and love.