Subliminal Message

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Teenage Chronicals

Have you ever felt like the world is out to get you

You tell your friends but they don't believe you

So you embrace all the facts and find out it's all lies and you sit and wonder

why such a subliminal message

has been passed on

There are so many excuses and trusting one another can be very risky

So you want to work things out

but as you move on your stuck in a velocity that carries you away

So there is a answer but no question unread leters lost in the mail

So it's all a Subliminal Message though your forced to live in fear and the questions that have no answer should never be ask but what does the message mean for real we don't know and we never will


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this in my point of few of life

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allets's picture

Trusted Feeling

The world IS out to get you. Suck you in like air until the room implodes. Risk is my new middle name - the world is an old stomping ground - an answer? You're stuck, you are lifting the mind from the quagmire, you're an amature about to mature asking questions like that. Enjoyed the plan spoken words, elliot. Write on!

 


 

 

sonic my dud's picture

this is the best I've seen by you. you're views are a bit off but not bad. how old are you? 14?

*dr H. Wood*

millie's picture

very well written, i don't think anyone could have done better then you, even if they tried for a million years.
and i know the world is out to get me, *turns arounds* i could have swore someone was watching me.