The Art of Loving

he pulled her into his arms and kissed her deeply.

he loved the way she moaned and rubbed her body against his.

spread your legs nice and wide for me baby

he said

he ran his hand along her inner thigh

she tried to grab his hand and hurry it along

but

he was in charge now and wanted her tight as a drum when he took her.

he shooed her hand away laughing softly

he rubbed his face over her huge erect nipples

they looked like big chocolate chips waiting to be eaten

he cupped her breast in his hand and licked her nipple

she hissed and pressed herself into him

he pulled her nipple into his mouth

sucking loudly

the noises coming out of her mouth were driving him crazy

but

he was not ready for her yet

he sucked her other breast and squeezed them together

she grabbed his hand and shoved 2 of his fingers inside her

she was sooooo slick and wet

he surprised himself by muttering curse words

hoping she had not heard what he had called her

she didn't even hear him

so lost in her own passion

he really wanted to taste her

but had left it too long

he pulled her under him and plunged into her hard and fast his head exploded with the force of each thrust

the feeling was so intense

he hoped he did not hurt her

as he plunged deeper inside of her

he could feel her walls pulling his manhood

he pumped her hard and fast

she was loving it

finally he could take no more

she was calling his name over and over again

he felt her orgasm

the feeling was exquisite

he lay there

still inside her

spent

but wanting to love her again and again

could he?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Michelle Howard's picture

i am blown away by the expressive way you mold the work the eloquent flavor of your writing can be felt deep inside. making some of us want to covet the art of loving. not always a good thing elle
an admirer of your work