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My Beloved

Say we have chosen our failures

Before success

Say we have chosen

To fail and fail

Ninety-nine times

To succeed for Once

And still have this dream

Say we have chosen

To sail and sail

And sink in the sea of LOVE



My Beloved

Say we were so talkative with nonsense

Trying to bring some sense

And still so silent in our hearts

Say we have been in a race with our thoughts

Our fingers froze

And failed us

When the heart is still in ablaze




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©2 July 2003 - 2:15am — elham
2 July 2003 - 10:58pm — Ernest Bevans (not verified)
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How else does one complement a beautiful song,
without sounding trite or erudite? The answer is simple;
one makes a complement by way of complimenting song:
http://www.postpoems.com/cgi-bin/displaypoem.cgi?pid=203426

2 July 2003 - 2:58am — David Richardson (not verified)
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Elham:
This poem is truly a sheer masterpiece. The love in thi beatiful poem is overflowing like a pictureque waterfall beneath scenic mountain peaks.The feeling of sincere and overpowering devotion to another is so refreshing-reminds me of a cool brief summer shower after a scorching hot afternoon. This is such a masterpiece Elham!! Thank you for sharing with me and have a very beautiful 4th of July weekend

Regards,
Dave Richardson
7/1/2003