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Who am I?

Who am I? Who are you?
Am i somebody that you knew?

Im not sure, im confused,
im not sure if im the same person
that you knew.

I think im changing, i think im done
being the scared lil one, i think im done,
being the one that everybody has to take care of.

I want to be strong, instead of feeling weak,
i want to stop and find my beliefs,
i want to start all over, and find where i made the wrong turns.

I want to take a step forward, and look back,
and say, its a new day.

Iv made my mistakes, more then a few,
i feel like my mind is going to argue,
but i know they have thought me alot,
and now its time to keep moving, one step forward,
at a time.

Who am i? who are you?
Im trying my hardest to not be confused.

I want to understand whats going on, and try
to keep moving on.

I should know who i am, but right now
im stuck in the sand, trying to figure out,
who is going to grab my hand, trying to figure out
when im going to take a stand, and see threw the fog.

Who am I?

Why am i doing all these things, that arent what i thought was me?
why am i doing all these things, that i didnt think i believed?

Why am i doing all these things, that are so strange and new to me?
why am i doing alll these things, that i dont understand?

Who am I?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Who am I, is about me trying to figure out why im doing the things im doing lately, and how they arent what i thought i believed.
and now everything is changing. Im not sure. but who am I, is me trying to see, where iv gone, and trying to see, where im going .

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©5 October 2012 - 1:10am — Elfy
6 October 2012 - 12:38pm — twisted_soul
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I know who you are, you are

I know who you are, you are you. Its ok to make mistakes, how else do you grow? Just trust me. You don't need to worry so much as you're young

8 October 2012 - 10:59pm — Elfy
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thanks john and shut it, your

thanks john and shut it, your younger then me

-Elfy*

9 October 2012 - 11:01am — twisted_soul
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I know but I'm an old man at

I know but I'm an old man at heart so yea. I'm wise beyond my years

16 October 2012 - 5:09am — allets
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I'm 62 - Old As Dirt

The poem was airy with questions, a bit wide open, but tolerable because of the content, song like repetition - a story, a quandry, asking is the first step to learning life's gifts and downsides. Take your beliefs with you, they house your fortitude and determination to succeed. i wrote "Walk away", you need that poem inside your head if I am reading you right in this art work. A journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step. - Lady A