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my hearts full of sorrow, my eyes are filled with tears, my soul is getting heavy, and I dont know why im here. I feel so lost in space, and its driving me insane. That i cant escape, the monster stares me in the face. Scaring me day by day, im faced with my wildest fears, coming true at last, and they are tearing me apart so bad. I think im having a spaz attack. Why do people that unknown laugh at that? They dont see that im about to snap and im ready to attack. Give me a moment to breath, maybe I can save you from pain. so try to walk away, instead of judging me today.

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A kinda random poem that came out of no where, but i think it had some what of a feel of what i was feeling earlyer today,
still im not quite sure where it came from lol cause im not feeling that way now. Some of it is how i felt as a kid.
So take it how ever you wish, cause im not sure how to take this myself yet. XD

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©31 March 2012 - 1:48am — Elfy
16 April 2012 - 12:50pm — thisisme789
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This one has bunches of soul

This one has bunches of soul in it =) <3

<3

3 April 2012 - 12:31pm — thisisme789
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I like the rhythm of it!

I like the rhythm of it! Everyone has fears, and I guess figuring out how to live with them is a struggle everyday...

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31 March 2012 - 3:59am — SSmoothie
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FEARS...

You know what Ive found? that through life the biggest fear is fear itself and it is never as big as we make it seem. I have found that even with my life threatened at knife point with six others I just silently, forcefully turned away and walked off Scared but calm. and they watched in shock as I walked and waved a police officer down. the universe very often provides when we take on the task... I really liked this piece. It is soft and vulnerable and it took me back to a time when very young I decided That because I am never alone I will never let anything physical affect me. I willed them to break and every single perpetraitor has; and I stand war torn but revived. love your work Cheers SS.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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