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Perfume
smells so sweet
so heavenly
so perfect to me.

Vanillia,
Rose and raspberry,
swirls into one.

It hypnotizes me,
grabbs me, traps me,
into this mistical dream.
Smells so sweet,
so heavenly,
so perfect to me.

Its what love
smells like to me.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote a poem called perfume, and the server crashed and i lost it,
so i had to try and re write it, but it is a SAD copy. GRrrr the other was sooo much better!!!!

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©24 January 2012 - 2:08pm — Elfy
26 January 2012 - 3:13am — twisted_soul
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This is ur 200th poem,

This is ur 200th poem, congrats! Anywho its great

26 January 2012 - 3:26am — Elfy
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Lol correction , it is my

Lol correction , it is my 200th poem posted!!
Lol I have over 700 poems total, maybe even more. But I don't have time to post them. Lol they are in many diff notebooks and tumbdrives lol

-Elfy*

26 January 2012 - 3:36am — twisted_soul
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Oh my, impressive. Lol

Oh my, impressive. Lol

25 January 2012 - 9:00pm — thisisme789
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That sounds like some really

That sounds like some really tasty perfume!

<3

24 January 2012 - 10:19pm — playbunny
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:D

love it, also makes me crave fruit and icecream....yum

Hollie C. Barringer

25 January 2012 - 11:44am — Elfy
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Lol thank you. I didn't even

Lol thank you. I didn't even think about that! XD maybe that's what was really on my mind lol who knows?

-Elfy*