Death is what I crave,
A demon calls my name.
I turn to see him wave,
Smiling as I walk his way.
I stop half way,
And ask him,
"Why he came?"
He looks to me,
With a gleam in his eyes,
And says "I'v come to take,
Your life."
"That's what you wanted right?"
"You begged and cried for God,
To take it away, to let your life fade."
"Well he sent your message my way,"
And "said its more my game."
"So do you want to play?"
"Want me to take the pain away?"
"Want to escape today?"
I take a few steps closer,
And ask ," what's hell like?"
He smiles and says,
"It's dark with tons of fire,
Lots of people who never tire,
A big red man,
Who loves whips and chains.
are you ready to play the game?"
"So do you wish to come with me??"
He reaches out to me.
As I take him by the hand,
I say,
"Well at least it will be warm there,
And I'll never need to sleep,
Sounds like a man, I need to meet."
"At least I'll get a little pleasure, from the pain,
I hope this guy knows how to play the game."
The demon smiles, and says, let's play.
He opens up the firey pit, and "says how would you like to die?"
I look into his eyes, and say "I'm not sure, what do you have in mind?"
He says, "well how about I rip out your heart, so you will never have to cry?"
"It will be a nice gift, to the big guy."
"Sure, why not, at least I'll never love again."
He slams his fist into my chest, and rips out my heart,
He slips it into his chest, and locks it.
He takes me by the hand, and leads me through the fire.
Down the stairs we go, my clothes burn off me.
He stares at my body, as I walk blindly down,
He smiles and says, "the devil will love his new toy."
With out any emotion,
I say, "good I'm glad to be his slave."
The demon asks me, "why I wanted it this way?"
I looked at him and said, "cause my life was worse then this."
He opens the gate, and the door to the cave,
And says "master,
Look who came!"
The big red demon,
Looks down at me,
And "says how lovely,
A beautifull slave."
"Come here my dear,
Tell me your name.
Sit and stay awhile,
While I enjoy the rest of your days."
I smile and sit down beside him,
He lays me down to the desk,
He chains my arms down,
And says "this is what I like best."
"Now before, we begin,
Why did you want this?"
I look into his deep,dark , demented, cold, cruel eyes, and say:
"Cause life was a bitch."
"Now, Let's Play".
Absolutely genius.
Absolutely genius.
Thank you lol :D
Thank you lol :D
-Elfy*
Lol, Holy Crap!
That is... wow! It's really sexy, cute, provocative, and I couldn't get enough! I'd love to be down in hell during this >;}
<3
definitely
a piece that keeps me coming back, my third read and i'm still not satisfied --- keep up the great work
Lol I'm very happy to hear
Lol I'm very happy to hear that.:D wow didn't think this was one of my best ones lol but apparently people seem to be enjoying it. I'll try. Thank you for commenting, much appricated.
-Elfy*
Yep outstanding there's
Yep outstanding there's nothing here I don't like artistically and stylistically as well a real talent, and gripping like watching a car wreck infront of you and the carnage and aftermath you are forced to be ushered out and away, but can't tear you concern away. What a ride! Thanks SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks I really appricate
Thanks I really appricate that. It means a lot. :) I feel the same as what you said, it is like a car wreck, you can't stop watching and even after its done and cleaned up, you still wonder. Lol thank you for reading and commenting. Lol I love that.
-Elfy*
Very Intense.. I really
Very Intense.. I really enjoyed reading this!
Thank you lol
Thank you lol
-Elfy*
VERY, provocative! I loved
VERY, provocative! I loved it!! :D
Lol thank you. Glad you
Lol thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
-Elfy*