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4am tears.

The clock says 4:00am.
I can't believe Im up again.
Once more, another day,
That I'm not able to sleep.

Sadness, silence, darkness fills the room.
I lay in bed, not knowing what to do.
I try to ignore, my emotions,
I try to ignore my hearts soreness,
I try to ignore my fear,
But instead, here comes the tears.

Streaming down my cheeks,
I try to wipe them away,
But I give up, and let the pain come out to play.

I lay in bed, under the sheets,
Tears soaking me.
I cover my face, to muffle the sobs,
So know one will wake, and find me.

Crying in a ball, in the middle of my bed,
I don't know why,
I don't want this to end.

I keep going,
Till I fall asleep,
Hoping to go, inside of a dream.

To hide me, to keep me safe,
To take the insane pain, away.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Not a very good poem, but I needed to write, to get feelings out. I just can't seem to get them on paper or screen correctly.
:(

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©7 January 2012 - 9:22pm — Elfy
9 January 2012 - 1:25pm — thisisme789
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There really isn't a right

There really isn't a right way to write poetry, I think. Was this about what happened over the weekend??

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9 January 2012 - 4:25pm — Elfy
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I know. But to me this poem

I know. But to me this poem wasnt the best. But ya it was about something that happened over the weekend. This weekend was rough.

-Elfy*

9 January 2012 - 5:17pm — thisisme789
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Sounds like it! You poor

Sounds like it! You poor thing! =(

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7 January 2012 - 9:28pm — twisted_soul
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there is no correct way to

there is no correct way to write poetry, it is how writer, writes poetry. short long fragmented, poetry is, or should be a reflection of you, telling a story of you and how you feel. i loved it like i always do, not cuz your my friend but because you write what you feel and make me feel for you.