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Un-tie my heart (PART 2)
Cause i dont know if i could take one more heartbreak, i dont know if i could handle the pain, or the agony, that it will cause.
I dont know if i could deal with being all alone, and scared and cold with out you by myside.
I dont know if i could keep going this time, if i lost you again, id break and there would be no hope of gluing the pieces back into place.
My heart would be nothing but a sharp shards of glass, on the ground.
Where i lay, and every time i move, they would slice my skin, and make me bleed,
and id cry as the blood trickled and flowed so quickly down my body, as my lungs breathed slowly,
soon to empty, no air left to fill them anymore.
No reason to live with out you, with out my heart, id be trapped in hell. And i couldnt lift my head, or move my legs, i couldnt walk anymore, if i lost you again, i cant survive the pain again, so if you cant promise to stay, cant promise to keep our love alive, and tied, please un-tie the knot.
Cause i cant do this again, i cant let you tie me up in your sweet , warm, perfect embrace again, i cant let you stick your torns in to me, or wrap your stem around me cause if i do, and we fall, you'll
be the blood red rose, that they place on my grave.
I dont need a rose, to cut and trap me in a love story, or a knot to tie me to another lie, or sad ending. I need a perment chain wrapped around me, and a un-brakeable clasp.
To last forever around my neck, with two hearts dangling below it.
<3 <3
beautiful, unfortunatly i
beautiful, unfortunatly i think the heart and mind are one thing, everything placed in our minds by either how much we hate or love things, and everything in between. are you ok? i see you said this poem is random, i have to disagree with you on that, all things have a reason. silly or random poems (not saying this one is) are just how you feel at the moment your write it. we all will deal with this in one shape or form. love is a battle some arent ready, some rush into it, some prepare for years, some dont even bother. love also is blind, you may think you love someone, but you might not, just the thought of her or the relationship, i should know. hate to say it but highschool relationships arent set in stone, hell aduthood love isnt set in stone just wait, natural mericals happen, think of a cave, the beautiful stilagmites and stelacties take years to form. yeah another essay comment but thats what your poems do to me.
I believe they are two
I believe they are two seperate that mix togeather.
im fine, and it was a random poem, but i was thinking of alot of things, and some About my past. idk what perticular thing was the cause of this poem, it had alot of reasons n muses involved i guess. I cant pick one out. It was random though i didnt write it for a perticulr reason though , whether or not you belive this, is your peragitive.
i know they arent set in stone, but some last longer then most. hell i know my next door neibors have been dating since they were 14, and they are still togeather at ages 36. Some are set, some change. you never know. And iv been with the guy im with now, more then any person iv dated. its a pretty long time, but you never know, it may, or may not last, but if it does, it was ment to. Idk though im not a fortune teller.
But anyway, if i say its random, then it is, how can you tell me what my poem is, when your not the writer of it???
Its my poem, and my words, and my thoughts, not yours. not tryin to sound rude, but its true.
-Elfy*
It's Beautiful, Part one and
It's Beautiful, Part one and two had me intruiged and could not stop reading a great way to capture your audiance!!! :) Love is such a powerful emotion. Any perticular muse behind this piece? :D
Thank you :) im glad you
Thank you :) im glad you enjoyed it. Thats exactly what i wanted to do lol. Love is a very powerfull emotion, lol ask and you'll find out what my muse was. ;)
-Elfy*