A litttle girls midnight prayer.

Dear God, dear Jesus,
Is anybody there?
Im sorry to wake you,
but im really scared.

Dear God, dear Jesus,
can anybody hear me?
Im sorry to bother you,
I hope your not too busy,
but i need to ask for help.

Dear God, dear Jesus,
Is anyybody looking down?
Im sorry if I wrongly acused you.
I hope you'll forgive mr, if I do,
but im looking up to you.

Dear God, dear jesus,
can anybody awnser me?
Im sorry to ask so many questions,
I hope you can help me.
But i need to understand.

Dear God, dear Jesus,
Is anybody going to show me, your really hear?
Im sorry to dout you, I hope you'll help me belive.
But I still need a sign, something to prov that your still around.

Dear God, dear Jesus,
Im getting tired now, its been a long day,
i hope that somebody hears me, and will send some help my way.
I could use a ltittle help, and a little bit of faith,
could you do me a favor, and send some to help me?

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Kiddo's picture

So very relatable. It cut

So very relatable. It cut right through to a forgotten time in my life.

Elfy's picture

Im glad that you see and feel

Im glad that you see and feel where im coming from :) Thank you for reading and commenting.


-Elfy*

thisisme789's picture

Wow! That's really good!

Wow! That's really good! That's also something that I've been dealing with and probably pretty much everyone deals with! Good job!


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MyRandoMthoughtss's picture

Really good :) i like it!

Really good :) i like it! Deff. something that we all go through...

SoccerBaby430's picture

Sweet, and cute

Im sure you where shooting for cute, but I think this is something that every child goes through... and even adults. Just wondering if someone, anyone above us listens to us at night. For me, it's my Guardian angel. =) Great job though.


Love,
Jenn

Elfy's picture

Thank you for reading :) I

Thank you for reading :) I appricate it.
Wasnt reallly going for cute, i may add more to it, but i havent finish it yet.
Its actually a really sad memory. Yes i know every one goes through, but this memory, is of when i was little, wishing, praying, crying, and begging God to help me, to listen, to hear me.
Cause i needed somebody to.


-Elfy*

thisisme789's picture

I would have listened, if

I would have listened, if Iknew you then =)


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