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My Soul Is Not Whole
My life has gone Gray, My heart has gone cold,
My soul has drifted from my body, My mind is confused, My trust has been erased and needs to be rewritten, The love of my life has became a Stranger. My world is no more. I have lost everything so close and dear to me.
My anger and hate are strong and my tongue is fast with hate and I say things with out realizing
till its to late. But my fear and sadness is stronger.That my world is going to end and the love of my life is not going to be here to hold me up. The sun is shining but I do not see it my whole body is numb and closing down. My body is tumbling like I’m standing in the cold rain, So dizzy like I’m turning circles, So broken like I’m a china doll that has fallen off its shelf, So sad like a clown that cant make people laugh, Can’t breath like someone is taking my breath, so scared like I’m falling in a dream.
I beg of you to cover me with a blanket and stop the tumbling, Hold me tight to take the spinning away,
Glue my heart back together,
dry my tears so I may smile, give me oxygen so I can breath, Catch me before I hit the ground in my dreams. By Elf aka(M.E.N)
your
work here is wonderful...the metaphor usage superb! It is difficult to praise in a whisper"; and surely it is more difficult to criticize your words, indeed, your words point to a great thinker and writer essentially backed the knowledge of your own heart and feelings.
Keep writing you have opened a door to a journey that will only end in your own fulfillment and the cathartic gains you will achieve may astound you....
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
tks
Thank you so much for your words and saying to keep writing I' m very bad at spelling but do look my words up, my fear of a missed spelled word is my big-est down fall. Very nice of you to read and understand what I wrote........
I understand writing to get
I understand writing to get to get the pain out believe me. This is really cool and well written though just to let you know.
Thanks
I want to thank you for your comment makes me feel better, have been so down you put a little smile on my face :o)~
Me or the one who commented
Me or the one who commented before me. Can't tell sorry.
You
I was thinking you for yours.....
For both of you, because the
For both of you, because the both of you had kind words.