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Roses are red,

Violets are blue.

I hate this class.

I want to kill you.

 

Shut the fuck up!

Just let me be.

I don't give a shit

about what you're teaching me!

 

This class is bull-shit!

I hate every minute!

You bore me to death,

why don't you get it?

 

Every passing minute,

my anger flares!

Why can't you see

that nobody cares?!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

So... yeah, this piece was written when I was in english class and I was very fed up with the material and teacher. Thus brought about this rage enduced gem, so enjoy! I do apologize if you are offended by foul language, but I feel that I shouldn't censore how I'm feeling. Anyways, criticism of any kind is welcome and appreciated!

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nightlight1220's picture

Made me laugh...it's so true

Made me laugh...it's so true sometimes. It's like the class should be called "tolerance 101"...lol. like chemistry was for me...ugh!!!!

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

allets's picture

Shit FuckDamnit Bitch

never offended by words - a poet who abhors English - now that's poetic! -

 

Teachers and professors sometimes suck

to the point of Airplane like responses,

self-strangling, gun in hand, grenades

to keep the rest of humanity from suffering

the fate of hearing the mundane when

a course in anything should be excitingly

presented to open minds.

.

The closed mind can not bear lack

of creativity. So goes the saying,

value in anything, but here the drone

drives one to wanting to drink. A lot.

Still, learing language is tedious

so my grandson is learning unable

to distinguish verb types. He'll

need that at university, but try to

convince him of that at age ten.

.

I wish I had taken linguistics in school

to know the true roots of the language

I speak. Some are lazy, but had

anyone suggested reading the entire

dictionary when I was ten, would

have been a nicer start. Tests are

the worst. My electronic fingers

twitch in English lecture.

.

allets

09-26-13

12:43p

 

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Lady A

 

bishu's picture

Inglish

Inglish me tries bt u wrt wndrfly poem specillay"electrik fingers"


©bishu 

 

Eebee's picture

I agree with nightlights, you

I agree with nightlights, you should post that as an origianl on your page if you havent already!

nightlight1220's picture

Wow oh wow oh wow, allets.

Wow oh wow oh wow, allets. That comment is the best I ever read... and as a poem it's ....

 

WOW.

....LIKE IT A LOT.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "