Holocaust

We in the camp are violated

paralyzed from torment

brutally we live

desperately in spite

memories inconcievable

our existence faded 

and moral right dead

our mind rejoice

in dark we dream

of distant homeland glorious

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You evoke the tragedy of that

You evoke the tragedy of that situation quite well, and the short lines give it an intensity that longer lines would probably have bogged down.


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